I Miss You, Dad

I hope that you can hear me, dad.
The ache today is strong.
I thought I saw a glimpse of you.
My mind tells me I'm wrong.

Some days this torture I can bear.
My memories ease the pain.
But soon my heart regains control;
Grief surfaces again.

Please know that I did realize
How fortunate I was,
That I could always visit you--
If only "just because."

I feel the bruising of your loss
Will remain blue and black.
Such pain can't fade to lighter hues
Since you're not coming back.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 5:57 PM
great words here thank you my friend duncan
Sweetheart Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 7:34 PM
Extremely touching Christy and I too can relate as I was a "Daddy's Girl" when he was alive ..he was the best Dad a poetess could have.. this was a joy to read.. keep up the great writing.. and thankxxx so very much for your special comments so appreciated..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Sohn Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 1:16 PM
Great last stanza. Thoroughly enjoyed the write, please read my poems :)
Palli Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 12:24 PM
Heart wrenching, will written. Susan
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