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I Miss You

Today I really miss you so much
Wishing I can feel your touch
Staring in your handsome face
Being at my favorite place

But you are thousands of miles away
And all I feel, I can only say
Wanting to watch you give that million dollar smile
Even just for a little while

You are working on our future I know
And I know you really had to go
Wanting to feel your kiss and touch
I miss you and want to show you how much

People have been telling me that old cliche
About how you are just a phonecall away
I know it and it is probably true
But is doesn't compare to being close to you

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Faraz Ajmal Date: 8/4/2017 7:22:00 AM Such a beautiful written poem, yeah I know it s so hard when your love is so much away from you, you feel his/her missing every single day but remember he s doing all this for you, as you ve mentioned it, I only have one friend in my life, she s my best friend, and she lives some million kilometres away from me, separated by two oceans but still she s the best friend I ever got Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 11/13/2014 7:19:00 PM Written as only someone whose love is far away can...great poetry, B. Kudos! Kim Login to Reply BE Bailey Date: 11/14/2014 12:42:00 AM Thank you so much Kim :) Have a lovely day. Hugs "B"

Gary Bateman Date: 11/12/2014 4:40:00 PM Most Excellent "B" -- Enjoyed your write here very much. This one's a "7" most definitely!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary Login to Reply BE Bailey Date: 11/13/2014 5:41:00 AM Thank you so much Gary for your positive and kind comment. I do appreciate it a lot. Have a wonderful and blessed day. "B"

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/12/2014 1:04:00 PM - Touching and well written "B" !! - Enjoy reading your poem - Bless you - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply BE Bailey Date: 11/12/2014 2:27:00 PM Thank you Anne Lisa for taking the time to visit my page and for your lovely comment. I am glad u enjoyed it. Hugs "B"

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/12/2014 4:57:00 AM Love is good. Missing the one we love only brings us closer in the long run. Great Write. Login to Reply BE Bailey Date: 11/12/2014 5:14:00 AM True that :) Thank you for the comment Maurice and for always taking the time to read my work. I appreciate it a lot. Warm Regards "B"

Kelly Deschler Date: 11/8/2014 11:46:00 PM Technology brings us closer together, they say, but it can never compare to human touch.... This was a beautiful expression of longing. Very nicely done, B! I can sense your sadness in every line. I do hope you see him soon! Login to Reply BE Bailey Date: 11/10/2014 8:37:00 AM True!!! Thank you so much for your beautiful comforting comment Kelly. Have a blessed day dear friend. Warm Regards "B"

Liam Mcdaid Date: 11/8/2014 2:59:00 AM it really draws the pining awaiting loves embrace deep beautifully penned piece bless you dear friend Login to Reply BE Bailey Date: 11/10/2014 8:35:00 AM Thank you so much Liam :) Have a blessed and wonderful day my friend. Keep well. Hugs "B"

Trinity Biles Date: 11/6/2014 10:53:00 PM Hang in there B. Much love, TJ Login to Reply BE Bailey Date: 11/10/2014 8:34:00 AM Thank you so much Trinity for your words of encouragement. I will definitely hang in here :) Love and Hugs "B"

Jaafar Sadig El Waad Date: 11/6/2014 10:46:00 AM "I really miss you so much"says how strong it's and only want to be strong Login to Reply BE Bailey Date: 11/10/2014 8:33:00 AM Thank you for your comment Jaafar. Have a lovely day "B"

Wilma Neels Date: 11/6/2014 7:14:00 AM This is a beautiful gem B.. Your last line says it all :) Hope you are enjoying your week thus far.. tc W Login to Reply BE Bailey Date: 11/6/2014 7:50:00 AM Thank you so much Wilma. I appreciate your comment. We week was good thus far. Hope you have a great week too :) Hugs "B"

Tim Smith Date: 11/6/2014 5:52:00 AM The craves more than just a phonecall, a text, or even an email...fabulous write B ....hugs Tim Login to Reply BE Bailey Date: 11/6/2014 5:55:00 AM Thank you so much Tim and I completely second that statement. Regards "B"

Jasmine Cruz Date: 11/6/2014 5:08:00 AM awwww B this is so sad. I hope the one you love comes back to your arms. very good poem. Login to Reply BE Bailey Date: 11/6/2014 5:16:00 AM Thank you so much Jasmine for the comment and lovely hopes. Hugs "B"

Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 11/6/2014 4:04:00 AM Beautiful melody to the one you love...the last line says it all. Login to Reply BE Bailey Date: 11/6/2014 4:20:00 AM Thank you Pace. Have a lovely day "B"