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I Miss You

I MISS YOU I miss you in my darkest hour , when I am alone and we are far... I miss you in my sweetest dream , without you its not fun to scream ... I miss you in my lonely nights,i want you beside me to hold me tight ... One thing that i really miss........ Is the time when we Kissed I miss you from the bottom of my heart.. love me , miss me you are my sweetheart... I want to spend evry moment of my life with you ,even if it would be dark i am alwes with you .... Please hug me i need your love... There is nothing beautiful than this over and above... Hold my hand in the crowd,you are the 1 among millions i found.... Make my life a beautiful journey.. fill it with the most memorable moments of my life.. Be with me till the day i take last few breaths in your arms... I Love You from every little corner of my Heart...

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Date: 7/10/2012 5:08:00 AM
a heart touching love poem .thank you for sharing .jk
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Nishu Bhandula
Date: 7/17/2012 1:35:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 1/25/2012 7:34:00 AM
I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it Nishu. Love, Carol
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Nishu Bhandula
Date: 1/26/2012 11:59:00 PM
thanx a lot Mr. Brown ... i wrote this poem for the 1 i love .... but i am sad neither he understood ... so i find it better to upload my feelings here ...
Date: 1/24/2012 11:20:00 AM
An awesome Love Poem, Nishu -bubbling with deep passion and unshakable devotion. It is a great write. I feel that the last word in the sixth line is meant to read "always" in place of existing "alwes". Best wishes. -Mohammad
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Nishu Bhandula
Date: 1/25/2012 1:27:00 AM
Thanks Mr. Yamin ... thanx a lot for your appreciation i am highly obliged.. yes its always not alwes ...thanx for correcting... have a gr8 day

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