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I Miss You

I miss you When you went away it was like a million needles poking my heart. I've told you a million times about how much I miss you. I know I was very young when you went away and I didn't understand that you were never coming back. I understand now and I wish I could have spent more time with you. I know it must have been hard for you to know you were going away, leaving two children behind. Sometimes at night I stare up at the stars and see your beautiful eyes staring back at me; and I start to cry, thinking about how beautiful you were. And I miss you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/28/2010 2:38:00 PM
Wow I really like this one too. More please
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Date: 7/28/2010 2:27:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... so enjoyed readin your very creative write tonight.. with luv..
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Date: 7/28/2010 5:17:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Angela. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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