I Miss You

I've been distressed because of you Messed up emotions Into depression I fall once again Sleepless nights thinking about you Stuck with the realitly that your now gone Your actions have caused me misery Out of this darkness, I pray you will be soon Until that day comes, I will miss you

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Sag Capone

Date: 8/25/2009 12:07:00 AM

Certainly have been there aswell.. one time too many. Good luck and keep em coming. -Sag

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2009 5:38:00 AM

Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara

Aleera De La Keur

Date: 6/30/2009 2:46:00 AM

I think we have all been there, and its a hard place to be, good luck, excellent write....Aleera

Diane Christian

Date: 6/29/2009 11:59:00 AM

a powerful write, sometimes the ones closest to us mess us up and the pain seems to last a life time, God bless you

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 6/29/2009 5:20:00 AM

I'm going throught this.You laid out exactly the way i feel,and i appreciate it=)