I Miss - 4

Looking at the green mountains across the valley below
Smelling the fragrants of the forest after winter's first snow 
Hearing the ringing of Church bells and the echos of hymn
Feeling the Birch bark, so paperly thin
Vine ripen tomatos that I myself grow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Anglesey Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 10:12 AM
Although we are in different parts of the country, I can relate to much of these images from growing up near mountains and planting a garden with tomatoes. Love it
Brown Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 12:07 PM
Sorry so late but I am here now to say congratulations on your win in this contest HG. Love, Carol
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November 23, 2012 at 6:05 PM
Daniel, congratulations with your win in Debbie's contest~ PD
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 3:38 AM
Congratulation Harry my friend a wonderful image you have given us xx
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November 18, 2012 at 1:23 PM
hi harry what a lovely rhyme my friend xx
Guzzi Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 11:58 AM
Your Liege if you leave off the last line this would be a very good verse for my 4 lines contest!! I'd love to show it off for you! Yours In Service
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November 18, 2012 at 11:57 AM
You are staying at a nice place .... well written. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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