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I miss poetry contest

Written 22/07/2024

 

I miss Judith, for devil that she was, she would give me a stare each time I pass, built like a fort on two pillars of stone, she would glare like I had sins to atone! she recycled curtains to make her dress, she tied her hair with old shoe lace, God bless, her speech was a dragon breathing fire, if disobeyed, consequences were dire. I miss Judith for all the things she did, under toughness, all the goodness she hid, clean house, good food, love and care she would show, harsh on surface, deep in, her heart would glow. my pretty wife’s dear mother Judith was, if in my house, you would know who was boss, she would make you feel welcome, serve you tea, give you roasted cashew, brimming with glee. judge not your dear ones for how they behave, we count their faults, forget all good they gave, not everyone in life trains to show love, in her falcon, was hid a peaceful dove. why pretend to be tough, shall never know, at hint of our suffering, her tears flow, many like her who glare when mean a kiss, for the angel she was, Judith, I miss!

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Date: 8/11/2024 3:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/11/2024 12:51:00 PM
Thanks Sara! :)
Date: 8/8/2024 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write. I like your lines, "under toughness, all the goodness she hid." Some are tough on the outside but soft on the inside. She sounds like she was a wonderful lady/friend/mother-in-law. You were blessed... Have a fun day............
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/8/2024 12:36:00 PM
Thanks Paula!:)
Date: 8/8/2024 6:53:00 AM
Dear krish beautiful rhymes and flow to your thoughtful tribute to judith, a person that has done so much for you: she does sound like a very kind strong person, pleasure reading this, congratulations on your win
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 8/8/2024 8:10:00 AM
Thanks Very much! Happy I was placed in your contest!:)
Date: 7/23/2024 2:26:00 PM
Awww this is so lovely, honest and real Kris! A wonderful tribute to your mother-inlaw Judith.... a good woman she sounds indeed! Though a little scary before you get to know her hehe!! Tough exterior and soft inside!! Really enjoyed this poem!! Debx
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 7/23/2024 10:58:00 PM
Dear Deb! Thanks very much! There are many such people - you just have to put their name here instead of Judith! Thanks very much for your kind words!

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