I Met This Little Shiela

4.22am 27-1-04
I met this little shiela 
She rode up on her bike
A Yamaha 350 from Sydney she did hike
So the two of us got talking
And we went down for a beer
And while there we were walking 
She told me she had fear
I said it didn’t matter 
I didn’t mind a bit
For I fancied her the latter
Thinking maybe her I’d get
She invited me to move in 
To join her in her flat
To sleep in the same bed naked
 Well what do you think of that?
We talked awhile of her one true love
Joe, a little girl so dear
Joe’s family had given her the shove
Because she acted strange
So off to sleep it’s then we drift
Hot body by my side
Bout 2am my hand did grip
Bout this I have no pride
So then she says just do it
And it wasn't very hard
So I cuddled and snuggled a bit
but the bed did move a yard
The explosion was riveting 
she threw me out of bed
The angle of the exiting
Get out it’s now she said?
So back to Sydney she did ride
Left me broken in her wake
It sort of tore me up inside 
Any difference did I make???  …  Don Johnson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Cooper Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 2:53 PM
very interesting read. yeas I have to agree with francine, the bed part kinda threw me too
Roberts Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 7:43 AM
it has a good flow but the "threw me out of bed, and angle of exiting" lines left me lost > I didn't get the meaning
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