I Melt With the Ocean

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When I sit on the beach and think of the ocean
The dream comes with the waves and ask me
'what's in my mind, what do I think alone?'

The ocean says to me with the rolling waves
'to get down and to swim in that blue water'
The waves on the beach and I are such friends.

I have also realized, all waves are like siblings
As if they're talking about my hopes.
Again I have started knitting my sweet dreams.

The sounds of ocean waves are singing in my ears
happily in happiness without any request,
Then this time I forget all my loneliness and hurts

I love the sound of the ocean waves
and like the blue water and quicksand,
I melt with the ocean when the wind blows.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/15/2020 6:24:00 AM
Nice poetry my friend. I love going to the beach, sitting alone and have my thoughts fly away as I enjoy the view of the waves. Best regards. Phred
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Date: 7/28/2020 9:08:00 PM
Hi Lure I like the way you give human qualities to the ocean which speaks and sings to you as you reflect on the trials and tribulations of life. A good read once again. Sincerely Brian
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Date: 7/6/2020 1:33:00 PM
Hello Lure Pot, so nice to met you. I like the the lakes, oceans, seas and ponds. Rivers and streams to. I like the sound of the waves. So relaxing for me. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/7/2020 1:59:00 PM
Hello Lure Pot, you are very welcome. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.Stay safe to.
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Imran Islam
Date: 7/7/2020 1:16:00 AM
Dear Darlene De Beaulieu, Thank you so much for your beautiful comments and love. I enjoy your write too my friend. Stay safe!
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