I Made Love To God

"Excuse me" I said with a smile.

The lady turned and looked at me for a while.

She opened her mouth about to say... But I didn't give her chance, I turned away.

That lady? I thought, she seemed rather odd

With a little less make-up I'd have said it was god.

The following day I went for a walk

I saw the same lady, she wanted to talk.

I became very nervous, all I could manage was a smile and a nod.

Before I knew it what started as a walk had turned into a jog.

That lady? I thought, she seemed rather odd 

With a little less swagger I'd have said it was god.

Just a week later I took a short break,

I was trekking through forests and swimming in lakes.

Whilst in the forest I heard a sweet song,

I followed the sound then all of a sudden, the voice, it was gone.

That voice? I thought, it seemed rather odd,

With a little less soul I'd have said it was god.

My adventure had ended, soon I was home

There was a note on my door reading 'dont stay here alone'

So I wandered and wandered with nowhere to go

When all of a sudden a voice said 'hello'.

It was that lady again, all dressed in White

She looked like an angel glowing so bright.

She smiled at me and took my hand,

Then whispered in my ear 'welcome to the promise land'.

That lady? I thought, she seems rather odd

But the love we just made, I know it was god.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 1, 2011 at 10:40 PM
Wow-Great poem! Very creative!!!!
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November 2, 2011 at 2:05 AM
Hey thanks. I'm new to all this but I have a few more ideas to come...
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