I Love You More Than
I love you more than
spring’s resplendent azure sky
there is a passion
I love you more than
summer’s brilliant waterfalls
I have a passion
I love you more than
autumn’s leaves of gold and red
I hold a passion
I love you more than
winter’s frosty tears of dew
you are my passion.
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WRITER'S STATEMENT
My poem 'I love you more than" is based on the theme of love. I believe that love itself should be everlasting just like seasons (in a way, I meant love should be always there, repeating over years and years and years... everlasting like seasons). The usage of seasons also act as a metaphor for lover's feelings, since I believe love should also have different emotions. What I mean is that at times, a happy couple may feel sad, depressed, angered, just like the big weather changes of different seasons. But whatever they have gone through, it won't be everlasting as they will be happy together afterwards again, just like any harsh and icy winters will always end up as the bright and brilliant spring.
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Sponsor: Mystic Rose
Contest Name: VALENTINE POEM TO PUT ME IN THE MOOD
Date written: 13/01/17
Placement: 3rd place
Copyright © Jamie Pan | Year Posted 2017
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