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I Love You More Than

I love you more than spring’s resplendent azure sky there is a passion I love you more than summer’s brilliant waterfalls I have a passion I love you more than autumn’s leaves of gold and red I hold a passion I love you more than winter’s frosty tears of dew you are my passion. ------------------------------------------------------------------ WRITER'S STATEMENT My poem 'I love you more than" is based on the theme of love. I believe that love itself should be everlasting just like seasons (in a way, I meant love should be always there, repeating over years and years and years... everlasting like seasons). The usage of seasons also act as a metaphor for lover's feelings, since I believe love should also have different emotions. What I mean is that at times, a happy couple may feel sad, depressed, angered, just like the big weather changes of different seasons. But whatever they have gone through, it won't be everlasting as they will be happy together afterwards again, just like any harsh and icy winters will always end up as the bright and brilliant spring. --------------------------------------------------------------- Sponsor: Mystic Rose Contest Name: VALENTINE POEM TO PUT ME IN THE MOOD Date written: 13/01/17 Placement: 3rd place

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Date: 2/6/2017 10:49:00 PM
A lovely write Jamie.
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Date: 2/4/2017 11:31:00 AM
Jamie, you have beautifully described a love for all seasons. And I agree with your statement at the end. Lovers help each other through the toughest of times. Congratulations on your win!
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Jamie Pan
Date: 2/4/2017 5:44:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn! :)
Date: 2/4/2017 5:21:00 AM
I like your comment, agree with you..heartfelt write. Congrats!
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Jamie Pan
Date: 2/4/2017 6:49:00 AM
Thanks!! :)
Date: 2/3/2017 7:09:00 PM
Wonderful job, Jamie. congrats on your fine win.
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Jamie Pan
Date: 2/3/2017 9:11:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!!
Date: 1/13/2017 8:44:00 PM
Each season stands alone as its own poem, yet merging them into one is seamless...my first thought after reading...well done
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Jamie Pan
Date: 1/13/2017 10:28:00 PM
Thank you, I've only started writing poems so there's much more to learn for me... I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 1/13/2017 9:42:00 AM
aww that is a beautiful love.
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Jamie Pan
Date: 1/13/2017 10:29:00 PM
thanks :)

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