Sunita U.D Palawon Poet Villanelle

I Love You For What You Have Been To Me

You, I've  loved  you  ever  you've been with me! 
None  supported me  as  you did,  so  far. 
On my eighteenth, you shone  elegantly,

Capturing  naughtily   what  eyes didn't  see  
When  I  held   closely  the  mini   skirt   star.  
So, I've  loved  you  ever  you've been  with  me!

In  the  dark   night,  when  I  tread   cautiously  
To  the robber you gave  a   nasty  scar.
And,  strong   and   proud, you shone  elegantly!

She came  and  shunned you  for   being   shabby  
She replaced you  and  you gazed  from   afar  
Still, I've  loved  you  ever  you've been  with  me!

Then   one   day  she  left  me  in   state   sorry.
I threw her  gift   to   hug  you  as  you are.
Dear of mine,  you shone  elegantly!

I was not  rich   man   when  you came  to  me
All crushed and bruised  you took me  to  my gloire.
Lovely shoes, I've  loved  you  ever  you've been  with  me!
I  love  the  way you shone  elegantly! 

27/08/16
Contest: My shoes

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Sarban Bhattacharya September 14, 2016 at 1:46 PM It is very nice. I enjoyed your villanelle, Sunita. Sunita U.D Palawon September 15, 2016 at 10:00 PM Hi ya thanks...I was quite in doubt with a villanelle for this topic. Glad you enjoyed.:) Sunita

Afzal Nusker August 28, 2016 at 12:19 PM Exceptional, I enjoyed it very much. Best wishes for the contest, Sunita. Sunita U.D Palawon August 28, 2016 at 1:14 PM :) Glad you stopped by to read and for the warm wish. Thanks Sunita

Sunita U.D Palawon August 27, 2016 at 7:33 AM My first villanelle. Hope it sounds good! :D Sunita