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I Love You For What You Have Been To Me

You, I've loved you ever you've been with me! None supported me as you did, so far. On my eighteenth, you shone elegantly, Capturing naughtily what eyes didn't see When I held closely the mini skirt star. So, I've loved you ever you've been with me! In the dark night, when I tread cautiously To the robber you gave a nasty scar. And, strong and proud, you shone elegantly! She came and shunned you for being shabby She replaced you and you gazed from afar Still, I've loved you ever you've been with me! Then one day she left me in state sorry. I threw her gift to hug you as you are. Dear of mine, you shone elegantly! I was not rich man when you came to me All crushed and bruised you took me to my gloire. Lovely shoes, I've loved you ever you've been with me! I love the way you shone elegantly!
27/08/16 Contest: My shoes

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Date: 9/14/2016 1:46:00 PM
It is very nice. I enjoyed your villanelle, Sunita.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 9/15/2016 10:00:00 PM
Hi ya thanks...I was quite in doubt with a villanelle for this topic. Glad you enjoyed.:) Sunita
Date: 8/28/2016 12:19:00 PM
Exceptional, I enjoyed it very much. Best wishes for the contest, Sunita.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 8/28/2016 1:14:00 PM
:) Glad you stopped by to read and for the warm wish. Thanks Sunita
Date: 8/27/2016 7:33:00 AM
My first villanelle. Hope it sounds good! :D Sunita
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