Gary Smith Poet Couplet

I Love You Dear

I watched it trickle down her cheek,

She now, too far gone to speak.

I told her, "I love you dear"

Then I kissed that one, last tear.







Entry for
One Last Tear Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Silent One
3/2/19. Placed 3rd.

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Anne-Lise Andresen February 7, 2019 at 3:13 AM - Gary, congratulations on your great winning poem ... writing about tears is a sensitive theme :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Gary Smith February 7, 2019 at 3:52 AM Thank you Anne-Lise. :)

Silent One February 6, 2019 at 2:00 PM Short but emotive poem Gary.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Gary Smith February 6, 2019 at 2:05 PM Thank you Silent One. :)

M. L. Kiser February 4, 2019 at 8:00 AM A beautiful but sad piece of poetry; good luck in the contest. Gary Smith February 4, 2019 at 8:04 AM Thank you M.L. :)

Line Gauthier February 3, 2019 at 9:13 PM How touching! Superb, Gary. Bravo. Gary Smith February 4, 2019 at 2:03 AM Thank you Line. :)