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I Love You Dear

I watched it trickle down her cheek, She now, too far gone to speak. I told her, "I love you dear" Then I kissed that one, last tear. Entry for One Last Tear Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One 3/2/19. Placed 3rd.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/7/2019 3:13:00 AM

- Gary, congratulations on your great winning poem ... writing about tears is a sensitive theme :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith
Date: 2/7/2019 3:52:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise. :)

Silent One

Date: 2/6/2019 2:00:00 PM

Short but emotive poem Gary.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Gary Smith
Date: 2/6/2019 2:05:00 PM

Thank you Silent One. :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/4/2019 8:00:00 AM

A beautiful but sad piece of poetry; good luck in the contest.

Gary Smith
Date: 2/4/2019 8:04:00 AM

Thank you M.L. :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/3/2019 9:13:00 PM

How touching! Superb, Gary. Bravo.

Gary Smith
Date: 2/4/2019 2:03:00 AM

Thank you Line. :)