I Love You Because

I love you because
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I have never believed that our god makes mistakes
no his timing is always on the money
You have strengthened this thought with a spirit
of gold and a demeanor like sunshine and honey
So please don't dismiss the gift that you bring
in that soul over flowing with light and power
Necessary to life giving joy to my day 
as the morning dew does for the flower
Your eyes are pools so inviting as I walk from my desert
it seems that it has been so long
Thy name has been written on my heart with letters of fire 
creating a passion and wanting so strong.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 12:23 PM
Beautiful and passionate write. Very romantic. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
Bourner Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 5:59 AM
beautiful lament. i hope you've entered this into the contest :) ------Ell
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