Caryl Muzzey Poet Rhyme

I Love You Because

Like the wind that has spontaneous 
direction,
and the sun that burns with a constant 
flame,
and the water that has a soothing reflection,
for a devotion my heart does proclaim.

Violins play a diapason on strings of my soul,
buried deep is the longing desire,
a unity that is quite resolute and whole,
with a ravenous appetite on fire.

No other humors my bountiful wit,
whether or not it strikes ample fancy,
maybe they just do not want to admit,
true affection is magnetic and chancy.

Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey

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Joanna Smith February 16, 2010 at 10:10 AM oh no you have definitly beat me in the contest =( but thats ok because this is by far the best of the entries that i have read for that contest =) the imagery and the heartfelt expression, it was really great! jo

Carolyn Devonshire January 26, 2010 at 8:25 PM If he appreciates your wit even when others fail to understand it, you have a special guy, Caryl. "True affection is magnetic and chancy" is quite insightful. The first two verses are truly romantic and the last one made me smile. Very nice entry for Matt's contest. Good luck! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown January 25, 2010 at 4:32 AM I say from the poetry I am reading this morning it seems it was an inspiring weekend for all. Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us Caryl. I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 25, 2010 at 1:01 AM Caryl, You have written love well in this Love-ly write. Good luck in the contest. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Derrick Burton January 24, 2010 at 11:17 AM Love the rym here. Enjoy your Sunday. :)