I Love You

I LOVE YOU can be communicated and heard
But the action of LOVE is more than just words
It's more than just letters
It should be used as a verb
An action that is given
A feelng so superb
REAL LOVE last forever
And true LOVE never fades
If you say that "you have loved"
I will be questioning your faith 
Because REAL LOVE last forever
It doesn't gradually just change
It's a feeling deep with in 
that nothing should persuade
The four letter word used by many
depending on the language
Some letters are prone to change
Although the definition remains the same
So when I say I LOVE YOU 
I mean it so sincerely
I end it with your name.
 
Je T'aime

Zack Brule
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dulac  Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 8:22 AM
Speechless there are no words for what he has presented here just his flawless way of thinking. Portrayed thru his art . Absolute favorite here
Sims Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 2:47 PM
awesome love it a lot great job
A  Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 1:15 AM
Zack Brule, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Dalei Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 12:17 AM
Zack, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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May 17, 2016 at 1:36 PM
Ha, this is a great way to send a message. Fa, .... Zack, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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