I Love You

I found Loneliness dead

between two daisies

and suddenly the wind

pushed the whispers back

inside the soul

and I started to talk dandelions

to myself:

I love you...

Such a fluttering idea,

it's like eating white vitamins

from the Moon,

innocent population will think 

that a Ghost raped the sweet clover buds

and Shakespeare- this ambiguous God-

will write a new tragedy 

soon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 7, 2016 at 2:43 AM
simona dancila, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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September 11, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Thank you Skat
A   Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 11:39 PM
simona dancila, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. :) Love -LINDA-
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September 11, 2016 at 4:53 PM
Thanks Linda, you encourage me!
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