I Love You

This life isn’t easy, this life is unfair; sometimes it seems like god himself, doesn’t 
care.  But when I look into your eyes, I can see the greatness in life, and how I 
wouldn’t give one moment just to make you my wife.  I love you, even though you may not 
see it.   But don’t let my looks deceive you, for deep down inside, you always knew.  I 
can not live with out your love.  Even when your eyes show anger and hate, I can see 
inside you, and know that you still believe in our fate.  I show you that I care, and 
how much I need you.  For without you girl, I know my life would be down to minutes, at 
that, very few.  So before I go, and before you leave.  Do not let my death for one 
moment, make you believe.  Before I go, I ask for just one thing; I ask for you to share 
one moment with me. And as we leave towards heaven and towards the light, I ask that you 
be made an angel, so you can fly down to see me when it’s late at night.  You are my 
world, you are my life, for that I thank you girl, so I will take away that knife.  You 
have saved me, you have made me believe, and no longer will I let my looks deceive.  And 
as I say good bye today, I have one more final thing to say.   I love you!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005


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