I Love You

I wonder why the world exist
   To live within i can resist
   The sun could rise through rain or shine
   But without my love i will resign.

Long is my journey to search for you
  Across to a desert without a view
  A paradise that i have lost
  To find you is my only boast.

One time i wish to have a chance
  To dream of you in moonlight dance
  Like a bird that swing and sings
  And wake by the bell that rings.

Voice that tells me "That's enough"
  To love is just to make me laugh
  I tried my best for just a test
  But found myself a serious pest.

East and west i tried to see
  My love even or over the sea
  Wind and wave won't see me free
  I will sail with a trunk of a tree.

Yes! I will do my very best.
  To find my love and we will rest
  Up in the heaven God will say
  Cheer up! And have a nice day!
  
Oh! How happy i would be!
   Smiling like a bumble bee
   A flower that must only be
   Exclusive for a bumble bee

Unite our hearts, to you oh God
   To fall in love is not too bad
   The only thing to you i ask
   To love him much, my only task.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 4/14/2014 10:17:00 AM
So great a piece, i love the rhyme and the rhythm.
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Date: 7/3/2013 11:09:00 PM
Beautiful poem. :D
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Date: 2/22/2013 3:16:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem today!!! :)
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Date: 2/20/2013 2:52:00 PM
Yes new friend this is Rhyme and the type of rhyme it is ..is Couplets. It is very nice that all your END rhyme [which means only the last word in each line rhymes] is not always perfect rhyme. When you rhyme God with bad..you are rhyming the consanat sound of the D! That's vey GOOD! Light & Love
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