I Love You

I love you

Let's face it, I do
Obviously you have no idea
Veiled and masked away
Enveloped in secret I am

You I love and no one else
Obsessing over you
Understand that I really do and I wonder if you do too
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kilmer Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 12:18 PM
I picture you standing in front of a foggy mirror saying these words to yourself. Then you wife the fog away as if to give meaning to what you just spoke. And then you ask the question not expecting a reply. Ah how many time have we all done this but with out such grace. Bravo, my love. Your words strike clean and true. ~Kilmer
Breidenthal Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 3:26 PM
Stephen.... thanks love.... you are a sweet and special friend of mine...~Laura
Rozario Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 2:57 PM
Get a megaphone and say the words in his ears...he'll hear. (be careful though...you don't wanna make him deaf...do you??...;) ).
Kearley Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 2:48 PM
Well,I love the Acrostic! :o) And you too of course! :o)
Breidenthal Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 5:21 PM
Awww ditto! :D thankies!
Williams Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 1:05 PM
Laura shout louder he might just hear you...David
Breidenthal Avatar
August 17, 2012 at 1:10 PM
Wish I could. :3 Wish I could. . .hahah Thanks Dave
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