I Love You

When i look at you,
whole world seems to be lost except you.
you take away my senses,
and give me a lot many worries.
what should i do to come to you?
what should i do to be with you?
the only thing that i want is you....
the only thing that soothes me is you....
though there is a great distance between me and you,
still i feel one day i will get to you.
what should i do to know your feelings...
whether you feel the same for me 
the way i feel for you??
i know its not so
but still i love you.
still i want to be with you
in the hope that one day
you will walk to me 
and hold my hand and say
I LOVE YOU
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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M V Avatar
November 2, 2010 at 6:55 PM
thoughts familiar,but presentation exceptional.good work.FABIYAS
Palli Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 1:43 AM
Emotional and well written.
Mehta Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 2:51 PM
Very nice thoughts on passionate love and its feelings penned well. Welcome Rhea. feel free to ask anything to any member of the Poetrysoup. You will get good guidance,
Pant Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 12:46 PM
HEY M NEW TO DIS SITE.... WOULD U PLS TELL ME ABOUT DIS?
Hill Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 11:41 AM
lovely write..TAH
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