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I Love You

When i look at you, whole world seems to be lost except you. you take away my senses, and give me a lot many worries. what should i do to come to you? what should i do to be with you? the only thing that i want is you.... the only thing that soothes me is you.... though there is a great distance between me and you, still i feel one day i will get to you. what should i do to know your feelings... whether you feel the same for me the way i feel for you?? i know its not so but still i love you. still i want to be with you in the hope that one day you will walk to me and hold my hand and say I LOVE YOU

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Date: 11/2/2010 6:55:00 PM
thoughts familiar,but presentation exceptional.good work.FABIYAS
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Date: 10/24/2010 1:43:00 AM
Emotional and well written.
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Date: 10/23/2010 2:51:00 PM
Very nice thoughts on passionate love and its feelings penned well. Welcome Rhea. feel free to ask anything to any member of the Poetrysoup. You will get good guidance,
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Date: 10/22/2010 12:46:00 PM
HEY M NEW TO DIS SITE.... WOULD U PLS TELL ME ABOUT DIS?
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Date: 10/22/2010 11:41:00 AM
lovely write..TAH
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