I Love You

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I Love You is a poem from my book Melodious Verse.

A rhyming alternating acrostic poem in 8 couplet stanzas written in 145 words.

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I Love You I sit and I listen, to the wind whistle by. Looking at the light, from the moon in the sky. I hear the crickets calling, to the stares in the heavens above. One look into your eyes, I know I am in love. I kiss you very gently, and hold you in my arms. Vibrant is your beauty; I love you and your charms. I walk across the world, with you near my heart. Even wild horses, could not tear our love apart. In the morning’s light, we walk along the bay. You feel the waves lapping, and see the waters spray. I hold your hand gently, and pull you close to me. Our love it is growing, for all that dare to see. I wed you in the morrow, I give you true loves kiss. United we are happy, and will never be remiss. By Josehf Lloyd Murchison

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Robert Sherriff

Date: 8/21/2024 2:37:00 PM

Each sentence you craft is a brushstroke of intellectual prowess, painting vibrant landscapes of thought-provoking concepts and captivating storytelling that beckons readers to embark on an extraordinary journey of imagination and enlightenment.

Josehf Murchison
Date: 8/24/2024 3:48:00 AM

Thank you

Robert Sherriff
Date: 8/21/2024 2:38:00 PM

THANK YOU