I Love You

I crossed all the lines
Left my whole world behind
Over and over I cried and cried
Virtually at some point I died
Every thing I did or at least tried
Yearned for your love far and wide
Only to prove thing you never knew
Until I made you believe that I love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Dove Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 7:06 PM
well, i guess im late...but congrats too. i loved it.
Ehigiator Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 7:08 PM
Very lovely, true love professed here, thoughtfully expressed and well penned.Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week.God Bless*Tyesha
Swanson Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 1:22 PM
This is beautiful and also very clever. I can identify with this... sometimes we change ourselves so much for one person, that we can no longer recognize our own selves. Great message and great acrostic too :) Congrats on being featured this week! Love, Amy
Augustus Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 12:53 PM
Beautiful, breezy and light. Congratulations on a well deserved feature.
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations on your acrostic "I love You" being featured. Vince
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February 16, 2009 at 4:43 PM
Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
Jordan Avatar
February 16, 2009 at 6:56 AM
Anuj - wonderful poem - a pleasure to read - Congrats on being featured - God Bless, MJ
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December 30, 2008 at 9:18 AM
sweet very sweet. John H Loving III
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