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I Love You

I crossed all the lines Left my whole world behind Over and over I cried and cried Virtually at some point I died Every thing I did or at least tried Yearned for your love far and wide Only to prove thing you never knew Until I made you believe that I love you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/18/2011 7:06:00 PM
well, i guess im late...but congrats too. i loved it.
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Date: 2/17/2009 7:08:00 PM
Very lovely, true love professed here, thoughtfully expressed and well penned.Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week.God Bless*Tyesha
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Date: 2/17/2009 1:22:00 PM
This is beautiful and also very clever. I can identify with this... sometimes we change ourselves so much for one person, that we can no longer recognize our own selves. Great message and great acrostic too :) Congrats on being featured this week! Love, Amy
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Date: 2/17/2009 12:53:00 PM
Beautiful, breezy and light. Congratulations on a well deserved feature.
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Date: 2/17/2009 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your acrostic "I love You" being featured. Vince
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Date: 2/16/2009 4:43:00 PM
Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 2/16/2009 6:56:00 AM
Anuj - wonderful poem - a pleasure to read - Congrats on being featured - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/30/2008 9:18:00 AM
sweet very sweet. John H Loving III
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