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I Love You

Mommy loves you
Daddy loves you
Brother loves you too

Sister loves you
Grandpa loves you
Grandma loves you too

God loves you, yes God loves you
He listens as you pray
God is always here for you
He’ll never go away

Mommy loves you
Daddy loves you
Brother loves you too

Sister loves you
Grandpa loves you
Grandma loves you too

God loves you, yes God loves you
He listens as you pray
We need to thank him every morn
for the start of a new day

(this Nursery Rhyme is written as such so the characters can be changed from Mommy and Daddy to Aunt and Uncle, Mommy and Mommy, etc. it is meant to be adaptable for the child’s situation. Basically, it is reinforcing love to a young child and that God is there.)
                                    March 6th, 2021

Written for Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Eve Roper

Copyright © Evelyn Swartz | Year Posted 2021

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Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/12/2021 3:48:00 AM - Congratulations on your lovely poem, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 3/11/2021 8:42:00 PM Evelyn, fantastic nursery rhyme with great flow and rhythm. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Evelyn Swartz Date: 3/11/2021 11:02:00 PM Hi Eve thank you so much. I am happy that you liked the poem. I wanted it to be adaptable for all families.

Jan Allison Date: 3/11/2021 3:01:00 PM love the theme you chose Evelyn and the fact the poem can be changed to suit families is so lovely, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Evelyn Swartz Date: 3/11/2021 8:33:00 PM thank you with all the controversy in the world right now I thought something simple would be best

Alexis Y. Date: 3/11/2021 2:03:00 PM Hi Evelyn, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Login to Reply Evelyn Swartz Date: 3/11/2021 8:33:00 PM Thank you