Evelyn Swartz Poet Rhyme

I Love You

Mommy loves you
Daddy loves you
Brother loves you too

Sister loves you
Grandpa loves you
Grandma loves you too

God loves you, yes God loves you
He listens as you pray
God is always here for you
He’ll never go away

Mommy loves you
Daddy loves you
Brother loves you too

Sister loves you
Grandpa loves you
Grandma loves you too

God loves you, yes God loves you
He listens as you pray
We need to thank him every morn
for the start of a new day

(this Nursery Rhyme is written as such so the characters can be changed from Mommy and Daddy to Aunt and Uncle, Mommy and Mommy, etc. it is meant to be adaptable for the child’s situation. Basically, it is reinforcing love to a young child and that God is there.)
                                    March 6th, 2021

Written for Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Eve Roper

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Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2021 at 3:48 AM - Congratulations on your lovely poem, Evelyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper March 11, 2021 at 8:42 PM Evelyn, fantastic nursery rhyme with great flow and rhythm. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Evelyn Swartz March 11, 2021 at 11:02 PM Hi Eve thank you so much. I am happy that you liked the poem. I wanted it to be adaptable for all families.

Jan Allison March 11, 2021 at 3:01 PM love the theme you chose Evelyn and the fact the poem can be changed to suit families is so lovely, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Evelyn Swartz March 11, 2021 at 8:33 PM thank you with all the controversy in the world right now I thought something simple would be best

Alexis Y. March 11, 2021 at 2:03 PM Hi Evelyn, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Evelyn Swartz March 11, 2021 at 8:33 PM Thank you