I Love This Bench

I love this bench
It's where I sit
To think of words
And rhymes of wit

Passers by
And featherd friends
Conjure thoughts
That have no end

I close my eyes
And I could be
On city street
Or by the sea

A salty spray
Or buses stench
It matters not
I love this bench

Rockman  :-)

Written for the Black Eyed Susan "On A Bench" contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/18/2013 1:06:00 AM
A vivid and pleasing journey. I need to find that bench :)
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Date: 8/19/2013 3:13:00 PM
didn't this get entered into the contest. If it did, I can't believe Susan did not place it. I would have put one like this into my top three!!! It's really good.
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Date: 4/27/2013 5:58:00 PM
COOL WRITE ENJOYED IT ALOT. I THINK EVERYONE HAS A SPECIAL QUIET PLACE TO THINK AND WRITE. THANK YOU FOR SHARING.
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Date: 4/26/2013 2:39:00 PM
word choice is artless.....pace is racing and rhythm perfect..
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Date: 3/26/2013 3:28:00 PM
love it, especially the last verse! i, too, sometimes sit on a bench and write - it's a great place to be.
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