I Love Joan

Written in Iambic Dimeter

Her ways are mine
Yes, I love Joan
Her eyes do shine
Voice low, soft tone
None, she alone

Do I want Jane?
Think I not so
Want she in vain
There is no glow
Can’t be her beau,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 2:31 PM
Hello Alfred you are deeply in love with Joan.That is how I see it. Have a nice day my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 2:28 PM
A good balance of heart and common sense. Smart, Alfred.
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