Nicole Sharon Brown Poet Rhyme

I Love Him

Although people say,
That he's bad.
I don't see it.
I wish that he,
Was here with me,
At our pad.
When I'm with him,
I feel oh so glad.
I wish that he'd ,
Come home. So I,
Won't be all alone.
I love my man.
I'm his number one fan.
I can't do without him.
I wish I didn't feel this way,
Sometimes, but then I'll
Feel bad because,
He won't be mine.

wrote 9-26-09

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Robin Maughan December 27, 2009 at 8:33 AM Love is lots of work! This poem displays love so well! Merry Christmas! Hugs, Robin

Audrey Haick December 22, 2009 at 8:28 PM They say 'Love is blind' and it should be otherwise it is not Love. So unless he's abusing you or causing harm to others intentionally, I say, go find him. Peace and love, Audrey - I wish you a blessed Christmas and a Happy New Year!

Robert A. Dufresne December 21, 2009 at 6:39 PM Love is a many splendored thing eh Nicole? Nice poem about your man. -Robert

Bryan Bolton December 21, 2009 at 6:20 PM A few months late to the party on reading your poem. I enjoyed the simple approach that said sooooo much. I feel I lived it, the person I loved and felt the way you describe has broken our relationship off :( Keep writing and don't be a stranger to the soup