I Love Her,, I Need Her, But We Are Done

I listened to our song
tell me if I was wrong
But I cried to your name
Who is the blame

It made me feel better for a short period of time
Then I cried, this has to be a sign

I dont want you to go
this you need to know

Our age difference should not break us up
But it did you told me whats up

I cant go on to bigger and better things without you
College, and work will be nothing without my boo

Please come back, Dont let me go
The feelings we had should let you know

Id give it all up to be with you Danielle
But your giving us up for me to compel

Move on in life become something great
But I cant without you, my love, my lifemate

Hear me out when I say im still tangled up in you
Know this in your heart beleive me it is true

Im not giving up, My love is to strong 
tell me all you want if Im wrong

But I care for you so much 
Im loosing it without your touch

Baby I need you
Im feeling blue

Dont leave because you want the bettering of me 
It's you that betters me, just wish you could see

Your the angel sent to save me
Lead me through life when I cant see

Girl my vision is blurry
dont leave me 
come back dont worry 

Your my life without you im broke
If you come back, baby there is still hope

There is still hope ....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/8/2010 9:57:00 PM
very emotional trevor, it reminds me abt the time wen i first started writing, after i broke up wid my girl, writing was a way i could express my feeling, den something magical happend and i won her back.... ders always a hope if your love is true.... cheers oscar
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Date: 6/8/2010 8:45:00 PM
aww...i'm sorry about the pain.
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Date: 6/8/2010 8:22:00 PM
We all need a little hope, sweet write
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