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I Love Food

I love you the best, but you LIE with your invites

Leisurely you come to entice my taste bud and hijack my brain
Oblivious to the addiction of sugary, fatty, salty foods
Victorious you come out ahead, lucrative to my waist
Eating for pleasure than hunger


French fries crisp and delicious you cannot eat just one
Oh, slathered with gooey cheese & pepperoni with sausage & tomato yummmmmm….
Onions rings, Cheese burgers, Bacon   so loaded with what is bad -for -you my undoing
Desirable cravings, makes my heart a beating, swooning for the meltinyourmouth good


6/29/2016

Contest:  I love food 
Sponsored: Lewis Raynes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Duggan Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 11:54 PM
Great poem Eve, you make me feel hungry, congrats. on the win, hope you are well, take care......Vera
Bankson Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 8:15 AM
I'm going to the kitchen
Haight Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 3:04 PM
You list those food temptations so well, Eve! And, yes, they always seem to win! Congratulations on your win for this great Acrostic. Hugs, Sandra
U.D Palawon  Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 1:48 PM
Hmmm...sounds so nice! Congrats. :)
Turner Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 6:48 AM
Back to say congratulations on your placement in the contest.
Gupta Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 12:22 AM
Luring into the coveted world of taste and flavor ... wonderful ...
Ashe Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 8:30 PM
This is literally a "lip smacking" write with all the fixings!!! :-)
Turner Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 5:34 PM
You've got my full attention! Bacon! Gooey cheese! What time do we eat? I like your take on the contest. Good luck, Mrs Eve!
Dietrich Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 3:57 PM
hmmm, maybe I should another contest with this topic!!! Thanks for the idea!!Yum!!
Onclaud Avatar
June 29, 2016 at 1:55 PM
okay, you had me there, eve.. too delicious to pass those burgers so i'm off-diet now... a swell, tasty piece!..huggs
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