I Love Advice
Advice came out her ying-yang.
Advice came out her pores.
Advice saturated her arms and legs.
Advice that most abhors.
We saw her in the grocery,
We saw her buy her cloves.
We averted our eyes and
We ran away in droves.
She appealed to children
Brought them candy and toys.
They gleefully opened the door
Ushering her in with all her noise.
Advice came out her ying-yang.
Advice came out her pores.
Advice saturated her arms and legs.
Advice that most abhors.
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