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I Lost You

i lost you it's already 4 am and still i can't sleep i haven't done anything but to weep crying for the love that i lost and for the memories i treasure most yesterday i saw in the mall with her your face was full of laughter wishing that im the one who's with you cursing myself for i'm the first who let go now here in my dark room i'm all alone can't hold the pain that makes me moan blaming myself for what happened wishing all these miseries to end stupid of me to let go of you when i really love you so now i'm alone and mourning for my love for you left me and my heart crying

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Date: 11/28/2013 7:29:00 PM
GEN< Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/27/2013 11:30:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Gen, You rocked me with your first poem, the mood, tone and attitude make it a historic master piece. Enjoy your stay with us as a family
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Date: 11/27/2013 11:17:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Gen ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/27/2013 10:08:00 AM
Gen,, I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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