I Lost the Guy of My Dreams

You promised me forever,
you broke the deal,
you told me that you loved me
was it ever real?

I'm out of mind,
I'm searching for love but i can't find
I was outside in the dark,
In a great park.

Nobody was there
So alone
But I don't fear.

I've been waiting for someone to come by
But no one to see there
Slowly i was bored and feeling sad and i started to cry.

I walked alone in the in a silent road
Talking alone with myself
Why do life so difficult?
My phone rang and i thought it was someone
But oh no i needed a load.

Fifty meters away,my phone vibrates again
Oh my Ghost,whos this?
My heart bump so fast
I've seen the number and i offed my cellphone
Cause it was the man who left me the pain.


My Quote To The One Who Hurt Me The Most: Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, 
and ends with a teardrop
I hope you're happy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Thompson Avatar
December 16, 2008 at 2:49 PM
I like this one. So telling. Keep up the good work!
Malone Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 7:16 PM
I love this poem...I know how you felt..
Payne Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 6:50 PM
I'm so sorry, my heart feels for you, this is such a great write, it really is. You have opened up your heart, amazing job. Hang in there :) ~Michaela~
Loving Iii Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 6:25 PM
the insight on this ... and i thought you were ignorant about these things. your growing up too fast. this one was very well writen. and i do mean very well. John H. Loving III
Ginn Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 6:18 PM
I like your quote, anything dear enough to you will probably always cause tears.
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