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I Lost My Love Today

I lost my love today I did, I lost my love today. When I awoke this morning My love had ran away. I could not understand it though I could not understand, I really had no clue at all Of what my love had planned. Lonely and bereft I am Lonely and bereft, I lost my love today I did Now I have nothing left. So I sit here alone I do, I sit here alone. Wondering if she'll call me I sit here by the phone. I lost my love today I did, I lost my love today. When I awoke this morning My love had ran away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Faraz Ajmal
Date: 2/12/2018 11:17:00 AM
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O it s so sad, the pain we feel when someone we love left us is immeasurable, we feel as if our whole life has been destroyed and that we don t have any other purpose to live for,
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/20/2018 5:12:00 PM
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So sad a poem Gary I love the rhyme and impact of the repeated phrase. great picture to accompany the poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/20/2018 5:15:00 PM
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Thank you Jan :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/20/2018 4:51:00 PM
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A beautiful but melancholy song --well written melodic poetry.
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/20/2018 4:57:00 PM
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Thank you Vijay :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/20/2018 2:25:00 PM
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- Gary, this was sad - Hope it's not a poem of reality - // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/20/2018 2:27:00 PM
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Hi Anne-Lise, it's a bit of fiction I have been playing around with :)

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