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I Live For You

i live to see you happy i live for your smile i live for you to be in my arms i live to be in your heart i live to love i live for your spirit i live to fill your dreams i live to scare away your nightmares i live to sweep you off your feet i live to brighten your heart i live to be your king i live to see you as my queen you give me strength you give me love you give me all i dreamed for you give me life you give me confidence you give me the ability to live to live off your heart to live off your smile to live off what we share to live off nothing but love to live off the happiness i give to you i live for you and only you

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Patricia Gregory

Date: 5/11/2010 5:17:00 PM

that was nice. don't give up. pray to God and ask Hime to give you the words to write. He will. Hang in there.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/1/2010 10:23:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Devon. Just write what is in your heart you will be surprized at what you will find tucked in there.. Love, Carol

Courtney Hallett

Date: 4/1/2010 7:51:00 AM

Check your soup mail Devon!

Courtney Hallett

Date: 4/1/2010 7:17:00 AM

You didn't disappoint me. You will think about something to write! Write about the sun setting in the horizon. As it shines so beautifully on your loves face as you sit next to her.

Skat A

Date: 3/31/2010 3:19:00 PM

THIS IS A CUTE WRITE AND YEAH TAKE IT FROM P.D... ENJOYED

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2010 3:10:00 PM

This is fine, and like P.D said, don't give up. Go to the contest area and get ideas for challengest too. LUv, andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2010 2:23:00 PM

no disapointment, you just gotta keep at it.. don't give up . P.D.