I Leave You This Note

I leave you this note
for I know not other ways
to say how I feel

Like the morning breeze 
my heart traversed steadily
until I met you

Now a sorry flower
I tend to my bleeding heart
wounded by your words

O lovely lady!
When shall the gate to your heart 
be open to me?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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March 20, 2017 at 3:17 PM
GREAT JOB PATRICK!! A STORY MANY OF US ARE FAMILIAR WITH.
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