Yoni Dvorkis Poet Rhyme

I Know Nothing

I know that you can see me
as nothing but the best.

I know that you will lift my heart
and carry me to rest.

I know my world is horrible,
devoid of endless bliss.

I know my brothers come with me
and no one will be missed.

I know I've dreamt that we were one
before I came to pass.

I know my dream will live again;
I know we'll always last.

I know that I can never be
what you won't have me be.

This lesson I have yet to learn
is all that's left of me.

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Belinda Parish March 12, 2009 at 1:11 PM Good write Yoni. Keep dreaming, dreaming keeps us going....and reach for the stars..

Lufuno Tsituhutuhu March 11, 2009 at 8:48 AM wow dats brilliant

Sara Lokken February 14, 2009 at 7:34 AM Very insightful, cutting, and poignant. A lot of truth to this. Thanks for your comments....I love your comments.:) I love the last stanzas best. Love, Sara:)

Chamonique Knowles January 23, 2009 at 8:14 PM ithaves a nice flow to it and rythm. nice job :) oh and thanks for leaving such nice comments on my poems :) and btw no the absence in "absence makes the heart grow weaker" is not permenant thank god! lol..... Livyyy

Keith Bickerstaffe January 21, 2009 at 9:40 PM Superb flow and rhyming... I especially love your closing couplet. BRAVO you!! Best wishes, Keith

Tyesha Ehigiator January 17, 2009 at 10:50 PM Fantastic write, deep emotions revealed here,good flow of rhythm and composure..Nicely done, I loved the ending(I know that I can never be what you won't have me be. This lesson I have yet to learn is all that's left of me. * Tyesha

Raul Moreno January 17, 2009 at 10:47 PM Nice work Yoni, the flow is great. I'm sure your dream will live again...Raul