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I Know I Can Stand Without My Feet

"I try to stand up when I feel strong But I keep falling into your arms I dont stay there for long I know you mean no harm But Im scared of being wrong I want to know ,is that real charm?" Why are you afraid of me I just want to be close to you I know what you want to be Your trying to be someone new Someone who can by themselves see Someone who will stop with the blue "Yes,your right, Its you I fright Because i want to be myself I dont want anyone or yours help" But ill help you make it on your own Ill give you a hand And ill see you grown Alone you shall stand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/31/2010 5:20:00 PM
Love the way this reads and what a wonderful message :) Thank you for your kind comments and I'm glad you're back! Looking forward to catching up with you.
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Date: 5/31/2010 6:51:00 AM
I like the flow of the words and the essence of the message. This is excellent. Joseph
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Date: 5/31/2010 6:49:00 AM
Providing someone with the ability to stand on their own is a great gift, Sajdah. If you can accomplish this when someone is reluctant to accept your help, you have really accomplished something special. Very nicely written! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/31/2010 6:26:00 AM
Awesome piece on co-dependency and the eventual ability to do it on your own.. Thank you for your comments on mine :) rgds Wilma
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Date: 5/31/2010 5:31:00 AM
well said... very good thoughts shared here today
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