Sajdah Al-Riyami Poet Rhyme

I Know I Can Stand Without My Feet

"I try to stand up when I feel strong
But I keep falling into your arms
 I dont stay there for long
I know you mean no harm
But Im scared of being wrong
I want to know ,is that real charm?"


Why are you afraid of me
I just want to be close to you
I know what you want to be
Your trying to be someone new
Someone who can by themselves see
Someone who will stop with the blue

"Yes,your right,
Its you I fright
Because i want to be myself
I dont want anyone or yours help"

But ill help you make it on your own
Ill give you a hand
And ill see you grown
Alone you shall stand.

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Izzy Gumbo May 31, 2010 at 5:20 PM Love the way this reads and what a wonderful message :) Thank you for your kind comments and I'm glad you're back! Looking forward to catching up with you.

Joseph Spence Sr May 31, 2010 at 6:51 AM I like the flow of the words and the essence of the message. This is excellent. Joseph

Carolyn Devonshire May 31, 2010 at 6:49 AM Providing someone with the ability to stand on their own is a great gift, Sajdah. If you can accomplish this when someone is reluctant to accept your help, you have really accomplished something special. Very nicely written! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels May 31, 2010 at 6:26 AM Awesome piece on co-dependency and the eventual ability to do it on your own.. Thank you for your comments on mine :) rgds Wilma

Michael J. Falotico May 31, 2010 at 5:31 AM well said... very good thoughts shared here today