I Know

When you feel like all is lost, you just can't carry on feel like giving up and your happiness is gone. You have to pick yourself back up, and find your four leaf clover cause you have a life to live and no way is it over. It takes a lot of time to heal, for the wounds to repair but you still have love to give a precious gift to share. I know it will be hard, once that door has closed and to give all of you again just makes you feel exposed. Times will get better, though it may take a while just remember all the good that once made you smile. Though I lost my Mom, I'm still a Mother and a Wife and she would want me to go on and try to live my life. I know it's gonna take a bit, but I have help to get me through and I know she is with me every day like your family, is with you. 7/3/14- Jessica Thompson

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Casarah Nance

Date: 7/26/2014 12:01:00 PM

Hugs! great way to keep going. That positive attitude is contagious and we all love to see ;)

Jt Nyx
Date: 7/29/2014 8:30:00 AM

Thank you Casarah, always enjoy reading your wonderful comments. I hope you are doing well :) Take care my friend, Jess

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/14/2014 11:08:00 PM

This is beautiful. Thanks for sharing it. God bless you and happy writing.

Jt Nyx
Date: 7/17/2014 6:23:00 PM

Thank you Regina, very kind of you. Glad you enjoyed. Take care friend, Jess :)

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/9/2014 10:09:00 AM

I would definitely categorize this under LYRIC! It may bring a wider audience, A lot of times when I put a piece under rhyme or free verse, People won't even look at it! THIS....Needs to be looked at by as many people possible! ----I just reread both of these comments and I sound like a real jerk, telling you what to do! HEy, I mean well, and your poetry is quite nice!

Jt Nyx
Date: 7/9/2014 6:14:00 PM

JSL, I don't think you sound like a jerk at all. I am actually moved that you like this piece. When I actually wrote this, I thought about the things you told me and what had been going on in my life. So that is what prompted this piece. Take care my friend, Jess :)

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/9/2014 10:04:00 AM

pick up a guitar, sit at a piano, hell, find a glockenspiel!!! IT DOESNT MATTER, Make this into a SONG! this is beautiful to me. KEEP WRITING!

Jt Nyx
Date: 7/9/2014 6:12:00 PM

Thank you, I have tried my hand at writing music before. I didn't do to horrible, but not good with music notes and stuff. I can't play an instrument, but Love to sing however, and dance. I think writing has always been my passion though. Glad you enjoyed this. Take care my friend, Jess:)