I Just Wanna Die

i just wanna die
slit my throat and cry

cut my wrists
and lie 
everything is fine

throw me in a hole
my ultimate goal
let everything go

i just wanna die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/25/2010 12:40:00 AM
ive read your stuff and its honest and raw with emotion. what keeps me going is the idea that i have one thing that no one else can touch its mine and mine alone, my hope. Hope dies last, its still there somewhere till your last breath is gone.
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Date: 12/1/2009 11:38:00 AM
i felt like this when my mom died i just wanted too die she just started coming back into my life the last time i seen her was on easter about 2 and a half weeks before she died i like this poem very nice
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Date: 11/30/2009 1:08:00 PM
I wanna see a positive one from you...
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Date: 11/24/2009 7:12:00 PM
Vent, poetry is a great way to vent.... The poets here among you can help...Give us the chance....:JP]
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Date: 11/24/2009 9:18:00 AM
thank you for the inspiration. That's all I want is to die and I think today is my day.
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Date: 11/20/2009 2:57:00 PM
This poem gave me the inspiration to write my new poem, "Never Say Die" Check it out... It may help!
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Date: 11/20/2009 1:28:00 PM
ummm?? Wow! I'll be praying for you... Life can be great if you make it that way. Never give up! Life is truely a gift... Don't throw yours away!!!!
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Date: 11/19/2009 11:13:00 AM
please dont do what you are saying in this poem there is much to live for please dont give up.... this is a very deep poem had my heart sink deep but please dont give up
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