I Just Gaze On

Your looks you give me so gladly
Salted sweet and pungent
Near a cloud I love them madly
In apples indulgent
I want to have all the cherries
Accompanied by blue berries
I want to have
I want to have
In my veins and capillaries


Your looks you give me so gladly
In shadow and sunshine
Your deep set eyes direct on me
A cool taste of dark wine
In blue and grey dream like dresses
Ocean plays on tumbling tresses
In blue and grey
In blue and grey
What a lake your look possesses

Your looks you give me so gladly
Like green leaves give to rain
When I need you very badly
For my poetry pen
I just gaze on your shining face
Music moonlight in your rich grace
I just gaze on
I just gaze on
How oranges make their sweetness
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July 6 2017
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Makama Avatar
July 12, 2017 at 10:02 AM
Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 4:47 PM
Your words dance in your own original beat on each of your poems, Probir. Such a gracious and loving poem, my friend. Love and peace always.
Gupta Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 9:34 PM
Thank you, Freddie ... Glad you like it ...
Roper Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 12:58 PM
I love the poem, ... ~*
Gupta Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 9:35 PM
Thank you so much ...
Onclaud Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 12:34 PM
delighted by the melodious tone of your poem, probir... you make me want to sing..huggs
Gupta Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 9:45 PM
In fact a young friend of mine has indeed sung it ... If I can I'll send you the recording via SoupMail ...
Andresen Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 12:14 PM
- Sounds beautiful and romantic, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 9:46 PM
Thank you, Anne ...
Turner Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 10:34 AM
This is lovely, Probir. You are a lucky man:):)
Gupta Avatar
July 7, 2017 at 9:53 PM
Obviously lucky or else would not have had unconditional poetry-friend like you ... Thank you ...
Trifiatis Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 1:41 AM
Lucky you my friend, Probir to have such a vision and lucky me to live these images with you through your superb writing!
Gupta Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 1:45 AM
Ha ha ha ... You are always effusive in appreciation ... Thank you ...
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