Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Verse

I Just Crash

Floating touch of strewn twilight tinge
waves feel on love called sea,
gleam calm till the moonrise,
surge with yearning tide to crash on
your shore with ecstasy,
I’m complete belonging.

August 5, 2019
Syllable count : 8/6/6/8/6/6
Checked on howmanysyllables.com
Brian's Choice C.

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James Inman August 31, 2019 at 9:20 PM Very well done with wonderful images filling my mind.

Andrea Dietrich August 12, 2019 at 4:04 PM this is gorgeous imagery, Subimal. you are always good with that kind of thing. And Nette really appreciates it too. Congrats on the great placement

Beautiful Scars August 11, 2019 at 6:15 PM wow great imagery :) congrats! -luloo

Nette Onclaud August 11, 2019 at 2:58 PM what a fluent diction, subimal... big congrats on your high spot and thanks for entering my contest!