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I Just Cant Win

I try and try to no avail I just cant seem to win. They tell me ill never make it, real optimistic of them. With things about my growing daily life and nothing for it to show. I just cant win Why is that? i ask myself, why can you not be better?! I cant quite reach the highest step, I cant climb the highest rope. If i tried to bake a cake I am positive it'll explode. Im not sure who i am yet but i know i'll get through life grinning. I will suceed oneday but for nowL Im just not winning

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/4/2012 11:40:00 AM

We must believe in ourselves Rachelle. - Luck for you in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Dont Givein
Date: 5/6/2012 8:47:00 PM

Yess, We need to find the positive side of every situation and just keep believing in ourselves! Thanks you so much :)

Rena Kiya

Date: 5/4/2012 10:27:00 AM

this is something i know well the feeling of not being good engouh not beingable to win i like how you made it personal and the imagry you used good job

Dont Givein
Date: 5/6/2012 8:50:00 PM

As lOng as we hold our heads high, life is all about how we see ourselves. Somedays its as if we can't do a thing right, but most days we just have to prove ourself wrong ;) Thanks you!