I Just Can'T Win

With all these struggles in my life
And
challenges of my days
It feels as if I'm walking through a dark,
cold,
damp, 
cave
I just want to shout
i just want to scream
I just can't win!
Its just not fair!
Can it be.. that my life has lead me, nowhere!
I struggle as i wake each damn day
I just can't get a break
God help me get through this
this isn't who i am
Its just not my way
so i just want to shout
I just want to scream
I just can't win!
Its just not fair!
And
As i wake from my super
who am i to think such things
Get up, 
fight,
Get on with your life
But
you don't have to scream
its not what it seems
Its all.... just......a dream


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Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2012 at 1:57 PM
Someone wins and someone loses..... - Have a lovely weekend in sunshine and love Dina! - oxox Anne-Lise
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 9:59 AM
The sun is shining bright here this morning in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and outstanding writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Dina. Love, Carol
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April 19, 2012 at 9:55 AM
Hi! this is good. I am glad that it is only a dream. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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