I Hoped It Was a Dream

It was the first nightmare I had awake
With chills,  fear replaced the blood in my veins
I searched for death and through the swiftest means
But death itself did cower so to flee
Far from the fiercest thing mankind had seen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/6/2016 6:40:00 AM
Nice to see this one again
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 3/11/2016 2:22:00 AM
you're always welcome here my dear! :) :D
Date: 11/10/2015 10:53:00 AM
Dominic, wow, to even want death is bad, well not as bad as death fleeing from you. Awesome write. LINDA
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Date: 11/8/2015 9:33:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Dominic!
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 11/9/2015 2:21:00 PM
thanks :)
Date: 11/8/2015 10:17:00 AM
very well done!! Congrats on a great win.
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 11/9/2015 2:21:00 PM
thank you Andrea, it's been quite sometime.
Date: 11/8/2015 9:49:00 AM
Hi Domenic: Congratulations on your win!
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 11/9/2015 2:19:00 PM
thank you for stopping by, i am happy you did.
Date: 11/8/2015 4:19:00 AM
The words give visual animation as if running of a movie reel. Congratulations
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 11/9/2015 2:19:00 PM
:D coool
Date: 11/7/2015 8:29:00 PM
Dominic, your poem and the picture make the perfect pair. Congrats on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 11/8/2015 1:47:00 AM
Hey Janice, that's so sweet, please feel free to stop by anytime, *hugs*
Date: 11/7/2015 6:19:00 PM
Dominic, Congratulations on your awesome win. I have a new blog up, "The Only Thing To Fear, Is Fear It'self" stop by and enjoy the winners and my explanation to all who join my contest. Truly enjoyed. Love SKAT
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 11/8/2015 1:46:00 AM
Thanks... much more love, Dominic.
Date: 11/6/2015 10:24:00 AM
Enjoyed you write on fear...left me wanting to more. Good job. Hugs
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 11/8/2015 1:44:00 AM
.... Thanks :) ....
Date: 11/3/2015 2:18:00 PM
i enjoyed :) SKAT
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 11/3/2015 3:17:00 PM
:) many many many thanks to you
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