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I Hope You Dance

Life can be like a beautiful ballet Few will see the hard work behind it, What you show is what others assay The rules are exacting, never forget, First, you think you have it mastered Then, you realize you are never enough, That your prized goals are blurred You’ll admit living a good life is tough. Life can be like a beautiful ballet Those who cannot dance will criticize They will insist you perform it their way Keep in mind life is more than an exercise. It is the real thing, your interpretations, Finding your strength, playing your role You can only live up to your expectations Clinging to all that is within your control. Life can be like a beautiful ballet Ever moving gracefully toward a finale Moving through the scenes every day First, the mountain, then, the valley Inevitably before the end, the climax You will reach the peak of your success Maintaining composure through attacks You'll hear the applause, God will bless.
BRONZE MEDAL WINNER written March 2, 2022 DIVwrites Magazine Poetry Contest All Poetry April 6, 2022

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Date: 4/4/2022 6:46:00 AM
When we do this "Finding your strength, playing your role" we have arrived!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/4/2022 8:19:00 AM
I think so, Caren. I really think so.
Date: 4/3/2022 2:17:00 AM
Life is indeed more than an excersise, another great poem Milton, Terry.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/3/2022 9:07:00 AM
Terry, I really appreciate your reads and your comments on my poems. You are most thoughtful.
Date: 4/2/2022 11:48:00 PM
These people rarely amuse me "Those who cannot dance will criticize They will insist you perform it their way"
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/3/2022 9:23:00 AM
Frankly, they just flat out aggravate me!
Date: 4/2/2022 5:18:00 PM
This is excellent. Great poem to read tonight :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/2/2022 6:04:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, and I appreciated your letting me know.
Date: 4/2/2022 5:00:00 PM
This one is a favorite, Milt. You touched upon some wonderful ideals we should strive to accomplish.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/2/2022 6:05:00 PM
Ah, thanks so much, Jenna. You are very kind in your response to my poem. I'm glad you liked it.

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