I Hope and Hope and Hope

The imperfect walk of man, cared about in recklessness,
careening for the wall of death, can’t be protected -
no longer in his mama’s womb. Womanized, dehumanized,
faithless…AnD cared about. Those left behind, want to rewind
their watches, but the truth is they couldn’t fix him. All his ills
in his bushy beard, behind it a smile, a hug, a shrug. Darkness
was upon him and in his circle of conspirators…can you believe
the music coming out of them - great big curses, whispers
mixed with praise music…the daring beast brought down
with determined gentleness. They flee from the Spirit’s power.

Still I hope and hope and hope, if this is the end, as it seems,
that somehow, by the skin of his teeth, he made peace with God.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hind Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 10:57 AM
A very faithful poem, Kim. I enjoyed it very much.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 10:27 AM
An intriguing poem, deep in meaning. Blessings.
Andresen Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 9:44 AM
- I agree with, Sam ... ( I hope and hope I'm wrong ... ) - hugs
Scott Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 8:32 AM
Kim, I am sure this has a deeper message than I can read, but I do love your line: "the daring beast brought down with determined gentleness" which has Biblical undertones and, we hope, is a life truth to reward the patience of the humble and meek. I liked reading this intriguing prose :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 9:21 AM
Thank you, Sam <3
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