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I Hold You



raindrops await sun
I hold you between each breath
slowly love dries tears



written  10-16-2019
copyright protected 2019
Jeanne McGee

lifelovehaiku

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Darlene De Beaulieu

November 16, 2019 at 1:49 PM

Hello Jeanne McGee, I like the last line of this poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

October 16, 2019 at 8:56 PM

Breathtaking!

Mark Toney

October 16, 2019 at 12:59 PM

Jeanne, I love the imagery between the raindrops, sun, love and tears. A Fav for me. ~Mark

Jeanne Mcgee

October 16, 2019 at 1:05 PM

Yay Mark...that the sun is the love and the tears the raindrops...you understood perfectly. xoxox

Gershon Wolf

October 16, 2019 at 12:02 PM

Oh!!! I'm with Chris. This is really a perfectly penned Haiku. A FAVE for me. Thank you, Gershon

Jeanne Mcgee

October 16, 2019 at 1:07 PM

I'm in awe that you men have understood my heart so well.

Chris Green

October 16, 2019 at 11:25 AM

Absolutely beautiful Jeanne. Such a comforting poem.

Jeanne Mcgee

October 16, 2019 at 11:29 AM

I've been learning from you!

I Hold You

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