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I Hold You

raindrops await sun I hold you between each breath slowly love dries tears written 10-16-2019 copyright protected 2019 Jeanne McGee

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/16/2019 1:49:00 PM

Hello Jeanne McGee, I like the last line of this poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/16/2019 8:56:00 PM

Breathtaking!

Mark Toney

Date: 10/16/2019 12:59:00 PM

Jeanne, I love the imagery between the raindrops, sun, love and tears. A Fav for me. ~Mark

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/16/2019 1:05:00 PM

Yay Mark...that the sun is the love and the tears the raindrops...you understood perfectly. xoxox

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/16/2019 12:02:00 PM

Oh!!! I'm with Chris. This is really a perfectly penned Haiku. A FAVE for me. Thank you, Gershon

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/16/2019 1:07:00 PM

I'm in awe that you men have understood my heart so well.

Chris Green

Date: 10/16/2019 11:25:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful Jeanne. Such a comforting poem.

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/16/2019 11:29:00 AM

I've been learning from you!