I Hide

I keep my heart in my pocket wherever I may go, incase I need to hide it, so noone 
can get close.
I'm so afraid to let you love me, afraid of what you'll do. You will promise me the world then turn your back and I will lose you.
I'd like to take my heart out. I'm just dying to let you see, but you have to accept what I need, but If you are patient and hold out your hand, I'll take it out real slow please try to understand.
Now I have it out. It hurts and I'm scared. I feel like I see noone, is anybody there, but to my surprise I see you in my veiw. It feels so good, but so much hurt still too.
If you love me with all that you see, then thats how I know you will never leave.
Now I know you love me so true, but I have to put my heart back till I can love me too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/20/2014 5:10:00 PM
Beautiful poem
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Date: 10/9/2012 6:50:00 PM
great write Dyna welcome to the soup with this gem,you have to love yourself before you really know what love is,so true
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Date: 7/5/2012 10:53:00 AM
This is good let's see where you can go thinking outside the box. That is to say I.E. the romanticism of riding a horse across a pasture in the sunset, or something
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Date: 6/25/2012 5:39:00 PM
I can second you feelings, well said and well completed. Good reading. SS Take head and care
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Date: 6/20/2012 11:41:00 AM
Great write here Dyna! Hope we see more of your touching work.. Welcome to Poetry Soup:)
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Date: 6/20/2012 7:08:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Dyna. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/19/2012 10:42:00 AM
Peace and blessing to you.
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Date: 6/19/2012 10:37:00 AM
Do no be afraid for love.......well written Dyna. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/19/2012 10:27:00 AM
True love can never hide : ) love Elizabeth
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