I Hear the Candy

i hear the candy no it’s the kids from far off wearing out knockers 10/31/2022
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Wolf Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 2:56 PM
Love the candy; love the twist in the poem even more. Thanks, gw
Rodrigues Avatar
November 3, 2022 at 7:35 AM
Thanks! I had candy corn in small bits! I always receive candy corn as a gift since I was born in October.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 12:18 AM
Lovely senryu.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 11:03 AM
Thanks, Victor!
Buehler Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 6:28 PM
What pleasant images! I love this, Kim. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 11:03 AM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Kyser Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 6:05 PM
I'm afraid I'd hear the candy. We live on a gravel road, so we never have anyone. Got smart and stopped buying any...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 11:03 AM
LOL…oh well
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