I Hear the Candy

i hear the candy no it’s the kids from far off wearing out knockers 10/31/2022

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/2/2022 2:56:00 PM

Love the candy; love the twist in the poem even more. Thanks, gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2022 7:35:00 AM

Thanks! I had candy corn in small bits! I always receive candy corn as a gift since I was born in October.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/1/2022 12:18:00 AM

Lovely senryu.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2022 11:03:00 AM

Thanks, Victor!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/31/2022 6:28:00 PM

What pleasant images! I love this, Kim. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2022 11:03:00 AM

Thank you, Evelyn!

Jeff Kyser

Date: 10/31/2022 6:05:00 PM

I'm afraid I'd hear the candy. We live on a gravel road, so we never have anyone. Got smart and stopped buying any...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2022 11:03:00 AM

LOL…oh well