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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F6FJF44bQys

This one shows scenes from Romeo and Juliet/ it was used as theme song for that movie

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4FHpmn-KYec

 

 

I Have To Believe That One Day

I have to believe that one day, I’ll be with you, happy and free. So trust in me, Dear, when I say together, at long last, we’ll be. Through each lonely night until dawn In dreams you come to me sweetly. I wake, thinking as day goes on together at long last we‘ll be. Even though now I can’t have you, Forever I know you’ll love me. That is the one thing I cling to. Together, at long last, we’ll be. I have to believe that one day together, at long last, we’ll be. Written June 2016 for Teppo Gren's Evergreens (Golden Oldies) # 3 Poetry Contest and inspired by Andy Williams' "A Time for Us" (This is actually a Kyrielle Sonnet, but that form is not listed here at Soup)
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Day Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 10:28 PM
Nicely penned for the contest. Congrats on your 2nd place win! - Jesse
Daniel Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 6:41 AM
This is positive and very Nicely done:) I did on the same song too:)
Babcock Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 8:39 PM
Loved this romantic piece and can almost hear the music flowing. love phyl
Mac Donald Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 7:51 PM
"Sweetly" and romantic, Andrea. "Through each lonely night until dawn" reminds me of last year's suitor. When I told others of him, nosey people said they hadn't seen him. I'd tell them he wasn't very big, was so very shy, but could serenade me throughout the night. Some laughed, others groaned, when I told them Henry was a cricket.:) Hugs, Mikki
Medders Tobechi Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Congratulations on your win with a lovely poem....
Canerdy Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 1:21 PM
A 7 for this fine response to the contest prompt, Andrea! Janice
Walker Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 6:34 AM
Beautiful love song matched by this beautiful love poem.
May Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 5:58 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea
Ashe Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 11:02 PM
With that song as the inspiration and having written this as a kyrielle sonnet, you have produced a very love optimistic piece! The best to you in this contest!
Austin Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 12:31 PM
This would make a good prisoner's song. How about Johnny Cash doing the vocal. Love, daver
Johnson Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 9:01 AM
Wow, love your new picture. A faithful heart of longing. For that one true love. :)
Nance Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Very nice, it has a sweet and gentle flow to it, a gentle yearning. I like ;)
Anish Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 11:22 PM
Very romantic and dreamy. I am working through July - I may take a long trip in August.. I just saw "On Your Feet" on Broadway - the life of Gloria Estavan. I am going to see "Phantom of the Opera" soon. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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